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October 15, 2009


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"This pain hurts, it sucks..."

Terrible sentence. First, it's really patronizing. Second, it really turns me off. Every time I try to read this entry to see if I want to forward it to people I care about, I cannot get past this sentence. "It sucks?" I get that you're trying to be conversational and get people on your side, but saying "it sucks" undercuts the seriousness of what you're trying to say. Are you trying to get in with 12-yr olds or grown adults who care about their health?

Writing "it sucks" really sucks.

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